Monday, March 15, 2010

The Precious one (Prologue)

The Story is purely a figment of imagination and has no resemblance to any one or any incident....... Please forgive for any syntactical mistakes...... :)

Jake and Frank were desperately seeking shelter as it was peak of the day with sun overhead and miles of desert all around them. There were no directions nor any human figure to seek help from. What else could they expect in the middle of Sahara. Its been 3 and a half days since they kicked off their journey to find the precious one they were seeking for 17 years. They started strolling against the sun as they were completely wiped off the energy quotient remaining in them. The last packet of food was emptied just a few hours ago. A big monstrous creature was visible at sight at a distance, coming towards them to imbibe them in itself and their was no place to hide. The region was quite infamous for its sandstorms which were believed to have taken lots of souls and grown with ages. Though the idea to escape seems to be impossible both started running to prevent their soul from resting in peace. But the poor souls were mere moles in front of the disaster creature. When both realized their efforts were of no use and will go in vain they stood still and gathered the courage to face the demon of their life chasing them currently. The sandstorm was just about to grope them into its clutches, suddenly........

To be continued

3 comments:

BS said...

Continue boss....!!!Its Good....

Sudharsana Raamanujan.R said...

boss it rocks. but one small suggestion is make it into a single paragraph to get the flow and write the story and send to us in mail. because you can publish it as a book and make it a hit.

Ramviyas said...

Its very Gud da.. continue!